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First off, thank you for requesting a critique!
Also, I am not a photographer... so can't go in to the technical aspect as much as composition...so bear with me. ^^'
Okay, I really like the tilt to the camera here. It adds some interest to the over all work.
It's strange...there is a lot happening in this shot...yet, because of the amount of what is pictured I have a hard time focusing on any one thing. This, while a great metaphor for the city...makes the picture less impactful.
I think if you partially remedied this with the angle of the shot...but at the same time it's still kind of a blur. Like my eyes glaze over with no focus.
I'm not entirely sure how to fix this...Perhaps taking this shot from another spot in the city? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Shrug"/>
Also, are all the colors natural to the scene? Something feels like the saturation was bumped up a bit.
I do agree with the previous critique, this subject has been shot many times before....however, I have to say, I don't think I've seen it from the angle. So, good job! ^_^